Friday, 6 March 2015

Magazine Advert Draft 6 Feedback


This is my music magazine advert after removing all of the text from it. In order to avoid any further mistakes or include anything that won't work well with the print, I decided to gain more audience feedback and ask them if this base layer itself works well. I asked two males and two female (David, Thomas, Emily and Beth). All of them said that this base layer, despite looking good and tying in well with the singing elements of my music video, they said that It doesn't look like the base kater of a music video magazine and that adapting on it would be (as David put it) "trying to cover a burnt cake with icing, it looks okay but the full effect isn't there.

From this feedback, I decided to scrap what i have worked on so far, yet take away from it all of the feedback and advice I have ben given in order to recreate and re-craft a music magazine advert that will work well with my music video but will also LOOK like a music magazine advert as well.

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