This is my magazine advert after incorporating the feedback from my peers for draft 3. So far I feel that this is better than draft 3, but at the same time it still doest't look right.
However, after consulting my teacher, she suggested to remove the TTN at the top of the page due to the fact that a music magazine wouldn't necessarily have the name of the magazine on it, and that could have freed some space up for writing. She also said that the font does not look like it fits the image well and the the brown gradient and background don't have continuation with the main colour scheme and style of my music video so far. I am going to take this feedback into consideration and redraft this magazine advert in order to get it up to standards.
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